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Dark Tints Arise

i feel like shit...
    constantly

i've got a few things in life
most let me down
time after time...

and even her.
the one i thought i could
hold onto until the end
of time

i've been proven wrong
it seems...
not a word exchanged today
fuck it.

i give others advice
"let them go. life your life"
i can't seem to
do the same.

i'm buried in
my own loneliness

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  • musiccraze2009
    November 14
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    we have all been where you are which makes this piece easy to relate to. good job.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 13
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    oh, I wish I could help ya. time will heal tho...it really does. (not to sound cliche) but its true. take your own advise...really, just let em go...it will be hard for a while at first...but each day gets easier. I swear!

    and


  • amnouup
    November 3
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    It happens

    Dear can't help it, life's just like this, nice write


  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    November 1

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    okay. so after reading this one also, i deduce that its pretty personal.
    the stories line up.

    this is happening to me too...
    with the one person i thought would always be there.

    digging your way out isnt fun....

  • Very specific and has many emotions,i enjoyed it,love your writing

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