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Lonely

The stars are siblings to one another
With the moon as their mother

And my god,
You must be as lonely as the sun.

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=/ You'll get through it Jinx.

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  • RememberMe
    September 27
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  • solarjinx
    September 23
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    I just now read your author notes, had no idea this was directed at me. Ummmmmmm, I'm dumb.


  • solarjinx
    September 22

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    it's one another, and this poem is striking! I really like it, ernie. and of course you know how I feel about great endings, you did quite nice with yours.