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Breathing Melodies

I miss your fingers intertwined
I miss your subtle goodbyes
I miss how our sides harmonized
I miss that shady month of July
I miss how your lips made me fly
Waiting for you to come back to life.

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  • Serene Rose
    September 24
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    wow. flows nicely. i am kinda confused on what it means though


  • Jaded Juliet
    September 23

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    Lol. I can't tell if July was used to rhyme with Fly or if it has meaning. Lol. Good poem though. You should extend on it. Good job.