I’ve been watching you for a long time now,
When things broke apart you let them fall down.
So much pain, all from one broken vow,
And in my sorrow you left me to drown.
A different girl on your arm every weekend,
Could it be that you’ve given up on affection just like I had?
My bitterness seems to only transcend,
Onto you and I know you are so mad.
When you pass, and our eyes meet,
We both feel the regret hidden deep.
“Without you I’m nothing short of incomplete,”
“I feel like I’m living life asleep.”
I looked down at your number before I dialed,
Thinking – “No, I can’t do this anymore.”
But we’ve been living in nothing but denial.
I’m tired of feeling broken; tore.
“I don’t mean to call at such a late hour, but…”
“I didn’t think I’d hear from you again, and I…”
“Miss you so much-“
“-My world’s been… dark and grey.”
“-I just called to see if you would forgive me and I promise I’ll-”
“-Change my ways.”
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Its really good lil bit. I really liked the ending before ads a nice little change of pace. The flow throughout is good, You really did a good job with the rhyme in the first part of the poem. I know you havn't been writing much because you've been busy with school and life and such but it was nice to read something new.
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This is amazing! I love the convorsation at the end, and your words 'I'm living life asleep' have given me an idea for a poem myself ^^
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i love this! it has to be one of your best so far. good job!
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You stay as you are hun.
And if he don't like the way that you are.
Then find someone who does!
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