the sand was soft under us
the stars flickering overhead
I could only see the lines
of your face
you were smiling
holding me tight
your lips soft on my cheek
your fingers
running through my hair
and the other
touching my heart
A contest entry
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such a tender expression sharing an intimate scene well.
nicely done.
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Soft and sensual, just like our contest calls for. You not only very aptly showed the emotions of love, but the phsical touch as well. Very nicely done.
Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy & Brazos
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very lovely I see the top picture
in each word here.....
thank you for entering our contest....
novy & brazos
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This was short and very well written. I enjoyed reading this. It was good. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.
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intense
this made us feel as if all that was happening deja vu..romantic scenarios are indeed heart warming and they really make for a very rousing read. I love dthis one. -
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A nice, loving, lovely romantic well written poem straight from the heart
A thoroughly good read ...Write on ..Best Wishes ....George
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Tender and quite beautiful, dear poet.
You capture a glorious amount of beauty
in just this handful of words.
Well done! Good luck!
I wish you all the best.
Zach Estel. -
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This is a tender poem expressing feelings for that special other with rich descriptive words. Well done dear poet!
Write On!
Brother Dennis
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