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promises

    phone on the table and not a missed call or message.
    ive been waiting for minutes, hours and even days.
    even days for you to call.
    not just one little message to say hi how are you.
    or wat are you doing today.
    not even a missed call from you.
    or any one else i should know.

    you said you would call later.
    but that later turned to days.
    when it was suppose to be hours and minutes.
    and  when we are suppose to meet,
    we are separated once again.
    by who knows what i want to know.

  as the minutes crawl by.
  im sitting in bed.
  as hours crawle past.
  i cant stop waiting for you to call.
  but then it hits one in the morning,
  the last text i got form you was at this exact same time just a few days ago.
  and i thought it would happen again.

  my love for you is a dream,
  with out seeing you face to face.
  with out seeing the way you would hug me.
  with out seeing the way you would hold my hand.
  with out seeing the way you would love me for who i am.
  with out seeing that you are the one for me.

  you make me feel that every thing will be ok.
  alright.
  that nothing will go wrong.
  you open up my heart and unlock doors that i never go to or even try to open.
  you open up my heart and you fill it up with every thing that i need.
  every thing i never though i would.

  but still you haven't called as the minutes slowly pass by and the hours drag on for
  ever.
  till another day goes by i know what i feel.
  i just dont want a guy that breaks his promises.

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  • StarEyes
    September 22

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    Ohhhhhh, I know.... the waiting is the worst!!! I really can relate to that! My love is in TX right now, and it is torture! I go through that daily myself....

    You did a great job saying what several of us are feeling here... there is a new group for it, Long Distance Relationships....


    • kel dog
      September 22
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      one guy is a long way away and the other is not. this kinda reflects on both of them.