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Ode to my Roommates

Boy I love my roommates
I see them everyday;
And while I'm hanging out with them
I feel rather gay.

I see them in the morning
I see them late at night;
When they are not around
It gives me such a fright.

Nikki makes spaghetti
And Jesse busts the weed;
Having them by my side
Is really all I need.

Because of them my life is great
The circle is complete;
Having them in my life
Is really quite a treat.

Author notes

This poem is dedicated to my roommates, Jesse and Nikki, who are so close we're like family. I love you guys!

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