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Lost & Found

Through most of my life
I have been lost in the maze of my mind

Mistake after mistake
Life never got better

So I found bits and peices of things
They made me feel better

But Again a mistake was made
And again into the maze I fell

I kept taking the same path
Not sure which turn to take

Hearing laughter
And gunshots

I was scared
Not sure of what to do

I threw help away
losing myself as I did

But recentaly I left for a while
When I came back I was changed

I understand so much than I did
My mistakes are new but fixable

So far for my life
I am not in a maze

I still hear the sounds of laughter and gunshots
But they are so distant that everything seems to be right

Soon I will Leave again
But I know people are waiting for me back home

So I can say with a real smile and no mask
My life feels almost perfect 

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 2
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    i like this write ^_^ really well written, amazing and it says a lot. great job!
    -penguin-


  • Nickey Mouse
    September 22
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    You just jinxed yourself but saying your life is almost perfect.lol.Anyway nicely written.