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You are the one

You are the one I cut my wrists for
you are the one that healed them

You are the one I write my poems for
but you no longer read them

You are the one that opened up my heart
so much I did I bleed to death and cry

You are the one holding my best part
now that you're gone it'll die

I don't feel sad when seeing her
but I feel pain not seeing you




PS: This hurt like hell to write. Not because the words are difficult or the emotions emerge from that. It's because it's the first one I ever wrote here without you.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Emilia Ricks
    October 26
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    Awesome

    Very touching... there was allot of truth to your works. You did a great job. I hope your pain heals in time...

    • Latradi
      November 11
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      Thank you for your comments and for reading.
      Take care,
      Latradi