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To Be A Woman

To be a woman is a gift,
a true privilege,
an honor,
blessing.

The miracle of a woman
is simply her presence,
and the dignity she commands
for her value
to all of us.

A woman is the origin
of all our dreams and goals

our beginning...

of what life has to offer
if we truely want it,
because of her

only...

A woman is our salvation,
the seed leading to our growth,
because of her desire
for the same.

The Lord created women
for His own sake,
and for ours,
for her own conception of

morality...

for all of us...

A woman has a degree of beauty
beyond our capacity to comprehend,
for this is the mystery
of her attainment,
and purpose

ours...

Women are selfless,
committed to those
other than themselves,
for this is their intent

giving...

to all...













Author notes

These words come from my heart. I have always felt this way.I am honored by your presence, ladies..I salute you all

John

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  • LeilaJayne
    November 14

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    Okay i was really really shocked that this was written by a guy! I thought it was some feminist lol. But i agree, it's great to be a woman!! Very original
    Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest... x

  • Brook-1 gold member
    November 6

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    This is such an honor to read this from a man. It shows such respect. I love what you said and how your wrote this. Thank you for the nice read and the compliment to women everywhere.
    Brook


  • liquidmindforever
    November 6

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    A Paean of Beauty!

    "To Be A Woman" is:

    Wonderful. Wise. A Heavenly-Earthly Tribute from Helicon for the Gifts provided
    by Mother Poet!

    Gratitude to the Poet who wrote "To Be A Woman" for His simple and meaningful
    Praise of Women!

    Blessed Be your Heart, John!

    stay
    for ever
    liquid


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 2

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    I've never saw it from this perspective before, what a beautiful write full of sentiment. You have a true talent my dear friend.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 29

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    Now this, I love!
    It makes me proud (and feel honored) to be a woman
    You did extremely well with this piece, my friend!
    Wishing you light and love,
    Sandy


  • Nineteen
    October 20

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    Lovely

    As a woman, this pleases me. As a real feminist, I say I'd rather be an equal than something more or less.


  • amnouup
    October 20

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    Nice emotions

    The emotions expressed in this piece for women is very nice and seem to be from heart, to be a woman has its own advantages and disadvantages but in general women are more committed than man who most take pleasure in oggling girls apart from his own wife or girlfriend, it really hurts a woman but since, this truth can't be changed we accept men of those habits, a bit of compromise for society, for bringing up the next generation :-)


  • sinfull
    October 11

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    Where I appreciate the respect and admiration given us through your well-written tribute, I feel it's equally important to remind all that a woman who gives to all must also give to herself first, or the gifts she has to offer have no substance. That being said, I commend you and your pen in this verse. It's beautiful and sincerely put. Very lovely pen

  • Synchronicity gold member
    October 11

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    A man of inner depth

    What a beautiful tribute! I don't know that being a woman is "an honor" or "blessing", but it certainly requires a certain responsibility to understand and react to the inner depths of a man. This poem is an expression of a man with great inner depth and understanding, and a vision that is pure in many respects. I feel honored to read this poem, and I find a most warm and inspiring place within it. My deepest thanks, John, for taking the time to write this.


  • Antebellum
    October 9

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    Women are selfless,
    committed to those
    other than themselves,
    for this is their intent


    I like this part. I dont agree with it completly. A lot of women are this way...but theres always ones who give us a bad rep.
    thanks for entering.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    October 8

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    The miracle of a woman
    is simply her presence,
    and the dignity she commands
    for her value
    to all of us.



    Being a woman isn't that great.

  • abu nuwas
    October 8
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    Hmmm......

    A bit pedestal-y? But I bet you're popular with the gels!


  • Grey.Area.
    October 8

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    Well written, I like this peace, you have amazing thoughts on women, and this poem is stunning, I really really enjoyed this piece


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 8
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    Nicely done. Very enjoyable too read. Keep up the amazing work! Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest!


  • smitaanand
    October 5

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    Hey your thoughts bout women are really very amazing if not gratifying and rather demand introspection on the part of any woma who reads them .This is because she must prove herself worthy of the pedestal on which you have placed women.Thanks for sharing ,please take care...


  • Desire gold member
    October 1

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    Bless Your Heart~

    Oh My this is a Beauty and I was given this linky by a Friend~
    I am Happy he sent it to me
    I'm a Woman and this brought a HUGE smile to my face
    Also I imagine any Woman reading this would feel privileged
    but special in a Unique way
    Bravo!! Woot~

    Keep that quill dancing

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 1

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    Wise-Wonderful-Profound-Unique...

    To read a poem of this magnificence at 06:00 A.M. is indeed a privilege.

    "Poet" is a feminine word, and so is Poetry.

    Poet is a female word... Mother Poet allows men to use the title too!

    Whoever dictated the masculine superiority did hide their inferiority under the skirt of religion. Those were the ones that pretended to ignore the history of mankind; or were so indifferent and mindless that never reached a level of intelligence to show gratitude for all the greatness that the female human being has proved throughout the history of MANKIND; for the pages of history will certify that no man was able to surpass the female supremacy.

    "To Be A Woman" sings to gratitude and to respect in poetic wonders. A true Paean in tribute to the Sublime Daughter of Mother Poet.

    Much gratitude to the author of "To Be A Woman" for this long due homage to the Tributee.

    Healthy happy day.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 29

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    you have penned a love of women
    wow this is stunning and such a tribute hun..
    you have written something beautiful
    treasured words one could be proud of
    hugs Angel♥


  • PurpleSky
    September 29

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    yay for us women lol. this was a great I am woman hear me roar type poem. I liked it and glad I came across it in the most applauded list
    huggles
    Lena


  • TheOnlyPhaze
    September 28

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    I don't believe all woman are like this but i believe thats how they start. very good poem by the way.


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    September 27

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    Thank you John for showing women as more than second class people.
    Your poem has touched my heart as i have been down for sometime feeling less than.
    My heart see's a man who understands ...and i believe that you should be the one saluted.

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 26

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    I'll take this write of tribute, when praise and worth seems hard to come by these days in my life...What is a woman...alot more is demanded of her than ever before. I needed to read it...and thank you for writing...


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    September 25

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    Sorry for the short comment. I didn't know this poem meant that much to you. Ah, I appreciate this poem, being a woman. I have to disagree that not all woman are selfless. Some woman abort their babies throw them in garbage cans, and etc. Some however are selfless. I hope this poem is a salut to them. I myself am also published. Congrats on being published.

    TQOP

  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    September 25
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    I agree! Thanks for your entry.


    • John BoSox
      September 25
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      Thanks For your extremely short comment on my poem that was published in 4 literary magazines..so kind of you, dear

      John


  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    September 25

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    what a wondeful and heartfelt tribute to the very essence of life itself. Gladf I read this one. You continue to stretch and explore your talent with each and every write. Thanks for sharing.
    Kendal


  • poetryality silver member
    September 23

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    Thank you and Bless you!


    What an honor to read these words on a day when I feel like my worth is dwindling. I find myself giving and not getting any returns lately. I am indeed a selfless person. I am happiest when I help others. Just yesterday I found that my behavior is co-dependant, and I do not like that term. I will continue to give, nurture, help... That's just me and you have coined me well. Again, I THANK YOU!


    Always with Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

  • t.k.ravindran
    September 22

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    to b a woman

    hi joHn
    found ur poem to b a wonderful one on womaN WITH OUT WHOM NO MAN CAN LIVE PEACEFULLY.BESIDES WE DEPEND ON THEM FOR EVERYTHING.KINDLY READ MY POEM "BEING WOMAN IS TOUGH"
    LOVE
    T,K.RAVINDRAN


  • whyspr gold member
    September 22

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    Thank you. Your words are truely appreciated. I know I personally can be a holy terror at times too , but your genuine feeling in describing women in this poem is delightful.


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 22
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    A beautiful poem. It made me smile to read this.


  • MoonlitRoses
    September 22

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    Aw this is amazing. It's heartfelt and sweet.
    Beautiful write, and I'm sure all women would agree. Though we are far from perfect
    Great write =]


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 22

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    Now how sweet is this. It's good to see a man finally admit women f'ing rule Lol..Seriously John, this is great! You're a kind-hearted man.

    • John BoSox
      September 22
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      Thank you kindly for your generous comments..nice of you

      John


  • JinSays gold member
    September 22

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    hmmm obviously you've never seen me at my worst.
    we can also be fickle, gossipy, indecisive, bitchy, neurotic, and heartless. and that's just on a good day.
    still it is nice to see one man on this Earth can see past all that.
    love,
    jin


    • John BoSox
      September 22
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      You are all in a league of your own..Thank you for your words..I commend you..so kind

      John


  • findingurself.less gold member
    September 22

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    Damn straight I command dignity! LOL! I also love the part that talks about a degree of beauty beyond our capacity to comprehend. Nice write


  • Ravynna
    September 22
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    I agree with Sidrah.....This was a beautiful tribute to us ladies! We thank you!

  • Sidrah liaqat
    September 22
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    this is lovely nice to see some men know we exist.

    • John BoSox
      September 22
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      I thank you for stopping by, and commenting,,so kind

      John


  • just2write silver member
    September 22

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    What wonderful words to say...

    Your poem is such a nice compliment to women. Glad you feel the way you do. After all roughly 50% of the world's population are females. I wish that both sexes have the same respect for one another that your charming freeverse relates. Nice words, worthy of framing.


  • StarEyes
    September 22

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    John,

    This is Bloody Brilliant!!! I knew you felt this way, after all you are my big brother, but to put it into such wonderful words... That is what makes this so brilliant!! I applaud you my dear brother!!!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • vdc94
    September 22
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    this is realy good!


  • whitecoffee
    September 22

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    Yes, this made me feel good Very nice work, John, thanks to you.


  • Witheyesclosed
    September 22
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    i agree with sweet arrival


  • sweet arrival gold member
    September 22

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    very nice thank you.
    i like how you take the time to notice things that we may not notice ourselves.
    lovely

    side note: the last woman should be women...


    • John BoSox
      September 22

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      Thanks for your comment..so nice of you..Thank you for pointing out the type..0

      John


      • sweet arrival gold member
        September 22
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        anytime. i usually send people messages with suggestions or typos, and the like only because i'm like that i guess... i dont know what made me just put that in there... rushed to make dinner? lol wonderful poem.

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