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All I Want

u have always been better then the rest
in my mind ur still the very best
u fill me up when i am flat
but u step on my heart like a mat
u r the one i always wanted, the only one id ever need
u make my heart race with adrenaline speed
u said that u would give me a shot
instead u found another to fill that spot
i dont no what i mean to u i dont no if u care
but this grinding in my heart is starting to take its wear
i found another girl to get u off my mind
sadness and misery is all that i can find
someways she makes me happy, what we lack makes it worse
its easy to see that looking for love is turning into a curse
all these happy thoughts of her id trade them all away
just to spend some time with u as little as a day
ur love is all i wanted ur love is all i need
if i could truly have that my soul would be freed
wont u please just let it show
wont u please just let me no
whether or not i should get up and go
wont u please just tell me so
im not a man that needs a lot
a little love will hit the spot
tell me please is it true
ull never love me the way i love u
i wish that i could read ur mind
so i no what in me u can not find
iv always loved u for all that u r
im surprised our friendship has come this far
iv seen the value of ur love i can see what i would get
its like a hurricane i can see im going to get wet
id fill ur heart with love like a raging monsoon flood
and afterwards id be left sitting in the mud
ur love is all i wanted its all id ever need
but now i see it passes with amazing speed
and now i sit here quiet and alone
it seems ur love is some thing iv outgrown
ur love is all i wanted but i no ill never feel
i no now that ur love is an empty peel
ur love is all i wanted i no u can not give
this pain uv put me through i can never outlive
these marks u left upon my heart are more then i can mend
but ill always be here ill always be ur friend
im just so sad that i have to say
i can not love u in this way

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  • Katie Boo
    September 25, 2009

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    amazing. i know this poem is about me. your the best friend i could ever have but im sorry that that is all i can give you. you will always hold a place in my heart, love always.
    katie. <3


  • Silent Pain18 silver member
    September 22, 2009
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    very depressing. you must miss her a lot but you probably realize that if she doesn't want you, then you can do a lot better. great write..