your words make me feel as though:
In the hottest of days
not a breeze in the bay
I'm a trembling bobber
on a placid lake
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cute
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this nearly made me cry..
i love it... but you already knew i did.. i loved it on my page.. and love it as much in its own light.. wonderful..
this is what poetry is.. isn't it?
m
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Well eMmy, it came straight out of me after reading your magnificent poetry. This in fact, should be titled "for m" . It seems to me that words are the building blocks and the truth, the mortar. Combined properly they can have the same effect of either simply a houseful of ideas or the warmth of a real home. Your craftmanship did, and does inspire me so.
Thank YOU for this poem.
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What a read. I feel that way about some.... I think we all have those in our lives, don't we? What a great job!
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This is beautiful, Dan. Ever so visual. Bravo, Scribe. 
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