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Excuse Me Madam!!

Excuse me madam, do you know me?
I am the one who  is your second child.

Oh yea, I forgot you only have one child.
I am just a tentant in your eyes.

Excuse me madam, do you realize I am the one
who bears your only grandchildren?
Ooopps, my mistake you are still hoping that the
other child will have children by mistake.

Well I just want to thank you for your confirmation
the other day. My children and I now realize we are
nothing in your eyes.. May God bless you in your aging
days. Because lord knows the other child will not be
there for you in the end.

Excuse me madam, hello do you hear me?

Yvonne J. Griffin
9-22-09

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  • budlem
    November 19

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    Sounds like you are trying to get the recognition you deserve. I believe everyone needs to be honored and recognized and sometimes praised for who they are.


  • poetryality silver member
    November 15

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    I feel the hurt here. I love my Mom but she knows that I am the "black sheep" of the family. My children hate my treatment. Maybe she is so distant because my brother who died and me are/were so much alike. Maybe she has a fear that I will be next and she doesn't want to ever feel that pain again. Then again, naw! She has always said I was a difficult, militant, bad...child. I was! But I too am her eldest daughter, and there is nothing I wouldn't do for her. I could go on but I want to tell you that we could talk because I so relate to these words.


    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • Stickboy
    September 22

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    this was such a sad poem to read... sad that someone can hurt you and those babys, She is missing out a special guft from God, your love and the love and laughter of grand babies, God bless you my friend
    Sean