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FuckMeOver

I Love You, She Says! I Believe Her.
An Addiction Maybe? To The Loving Sensation.
Or A Complication In Her Failed Construction?
E v e r y t h i n g, Is What I Did For Her.
I Had Never Been So Positive So Dedicated
So Mad, So Sad, So Happy So Disapointed.
I'm Broken Into Bloody Pieces That Spell Out Your Name
I'm Broken Half Way Up That Hill Screaming Out
To The Stars Make Some Room For Me There.
So I Can Rain My Blood Over Her.
So I Can Rain My Tears Over Her, And Wash Her Away
Vomitting Black Rose Petals To Show How Much I Love Her.
Sitting On Clowd 81 So Uncomfterble With What im Doing
Hating!? Bleeding!? Screaming!? Whispering!?
Baby! I've Layed Down My Life Before You.
This Shadowed Angel Is Shooting Arrows At You
Over And Over Arrows Pass Trough Her.
So Spineless And Heartless She's Got Nothing To Hit. 
My Broken Body Beaten With Passion.
This Is Me Loving In A Broken And Fading Fashion

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  • loveisntforme
    October 1
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    aw

    im sorry this happened to you


  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    September 26

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    Deep

    wow! pouring your heart out to someone you love with all your being......wow!!.....this is very heartfelt.....felt your agony & pleasure at the same time......again wow!!!......loved it......it speaks volumes beyond words......well-written from the heart and soul of your being......that is what i felt while reading your masterpiece of love,pain, sadness, passion....this is deep.....love peace & harmony


  • daffodilblossom
    September 25
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    bravo

    so spineless and heartless shes got nothing to hit true emotion and very raw