When last we left him
The Cube, yes,
He was recently diagnosed
A sole have of
A broken heart from
Some lost love (who knew?)
And quite surprised
Of the news himself
But still a genuinely
Unlucky man,
He is a one and only
Body bag
Of his very,
Very rare shared love.
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this is an amazing poem..."He was recently diagnosed
A sole have of
A broken heart from
Some lost love (who knew?)" these things sadly happen sometimes
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well chosen words and short lines really gave enough to tell the reader, but not enough-- to let the reader fill in the blanks.
"recently diagnosed... of a broken heart..." love the last four lines, too. "very rare shared love" is incredibly well worded and thought out. picture is unique, too.
thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed reading your style, here : )
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OMG THIS IS AWESOME...SAD AS HELL...BUT AWESOME....ODDLY IT PUTS ME IN MIND OF THE STYLE OF KENNETH GRAHAM (WIND IN THE WILLOWS)
YOU HAVE HUGE TALENT MY FRIEND I HOPE BEING ABLE TO CONVEY YOUR EMOTIONS BRINGS COMFORT
HUGS
T
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Ah, you've returned.
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