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Untamed Overture

Notes trickle softly balancing raindrops,

sending currents along my spine

encapsulating every sense of my being, violin's awaken.

 

Strings magically reverberate,

enchanting my ears sensually.

Closing my eyes, I sigh heavenly,

imaging being swept away, a part of the music, inseparable

enveloped in delight, dangling gently, on the whim of magic released.

Sereneness sweeps in casually,

awakening hidden desirability ; set my soul alive upon strings.

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  • LylaEmoriaCullen
    October 30
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    I really like this poem, it's so magical and peaceful... Keep up the good work


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 12

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    this is a beautiful poem, I absolutely love the first three lines. such a soft feel to this. the imagery is wonderful.. thank you for taking the time to enter my contest

    good luck

    Kat


  • Nevel
    October 5

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    On the whole a smoothly write with soft imagery with complex thoughts embedded into it....a very musical piece lol
    Good luck to you
    Erwin


  • Nevel
    September 28
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    you hurry up