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What a Cinderella Girl

She was shattered
broken down and bruised

She'd been plucked out of glamour
&& left in a world of hand-me-down ribbons
&& secondhand pearls

(what a girl)

So she'd cry at night, thinking how
baby dolls were better than baby tears
and how the beatings were preferable to this

Thinking about mommy's hands anddaddy's plans
&& how she'd love to brush that doll's hair
one
last
time



Author notes

-Andi

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  • Kataleena
    September 22

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    I cried reading this. Yes it looks hastily types, but that kind of adds to it I think. It's pain and despair and somehow sweetness all at once. At least that's what I saw.


    • Andiness
      September 23
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      Sorry it made you cry but Im glad it was emotional enough to do so, lol

      people say they cry at some of my poems....it makes me feel hard hearted because I never cry when reading stuff (with 2 exceptions, one poem on here by a friend and The Host by stephenie meyer...I cried there...)

      -Andi