'Request not for backtracking, but sandwich yourself in between left and right and forward shall be the future in which you can obtain what the eyes seek'
(C)Noor 9/22/2009
Author notes
Contest prompt:
Prompt - I can look left, I can look right. But I can't look backwards.
Give me a one liner on the above (it doesnt matter if you use more than one line, aslong as its in one sentence) or even a Haiku.
Thanks for reading!
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A contest entry
- One Liners by Ken-Maverick.
400 points, ended September 28, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any suggestions for improvement?
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great take on the prompt, congrats on the gold, well done!
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like a confucian philosophy on life which is worthy of meditation.
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JUDGED!!!
Now this is the kinda one liner i was looking for...
Well done poet
Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.
Ken
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Great one line poem with an excellent message. The future and what is sought is forward!
Nicely expressed!
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A nice one-liner, my dear friend! So full of wisdom and meaning and ah in just one line! Ahsant to you for you are talented obviously.
Wish best wishes in the contest for you
~Massy~
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Oh my
I love this
in between brings purpose, balance
Noor I am so impressed with this
great amazing insight
love it!
God bless you my friend...
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