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~Not in the past~


'Request not for backtracking, but sandwich yourself in between left and right and forward shall be the future in which you can obtain what the eyes seek'

 

(C)Noor 9/22/2009 

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Contest prompt:
Prompt - I can look left, I can look right. But I can't look backwards.
Give me a one liner on the above (it doesnt matter if you use more than one line, aslong as its in one sentence) or even a Haiku.

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  • dutch2lips gold member
    September 28

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    great take on the prompt, congrats on the gold, well done!


  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 25

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    like a confucian philosophy on life which is worthy of meditation.


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 25

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    JUDGED!!!

    Now this is the kinda one liner i was looking for...
    Well done poet
    Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.

    Ken


  • mgmc gold member
    September 24

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    Great one line poem with an excellent message. The future and what is sought is forward!
    Nicely expressed!


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 22

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    A nice one-liner, my dear friend! So full of wisdom and meaning and ah in just one line! Ahsant to you for you are talented obviously.
    Wish best wishes in the contest for you

    ~Massy~


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 22

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    Oh my
    I love this
    in between brings purpose, balance
    Noor I am so impressed with this
    great amazing insight
    love it!
    God bless you my friend...

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