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Fruitful Life

My left hand to give,
My right hand to lead.
If I leave these both,
and look back, then...
I can't make my Life,
Fruitful to live.

A contest entry

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  • Ken-Maverick
    September 25

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    JUDGED!

    Nicley done poet,
    but i think there was more than one sentence in this.
    Still, well done.
    Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.

    Ken