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Tuna Bear Madness

Crazed tuna with polar bear mated,
Twinkie a la mode diet sated,
Coca cola sandwich created,
Blubber gene ancestry abated

Little cubs Harry Potter books read,
Before jumping each night into bed,
After doughnut eggplant treats were fed,
New version Atkins diet they said.

Tuna bears have grown up to be strong,
Rich from Coca Cola ads plaid song,
Stars of film “Tuna Bears Meet King Kong,”
So cute and pudgy, can do no wrong

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  • Perfect Asymmetry
    September 26

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    I love bears and I enjoyed reading this. I could imagine the cubs reading Harry Potter!
    Nela


  • awannabepoet
    September 24

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    Oh thius is sweet, what a cute rhyme and fun to read.

    Thank you so much for this brought a little silly smile to my day.


    • mgmc gold member
      September 24
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      Zany poetry is too much fun to pass on!


  • penman gold member
    September 22

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    Excellent

    Oh my this was great. Such a terrific write. And wonderful use of rhyme. Best of luck in the contest


  • GotLilt
    September 22

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    This is adorable. What a concept!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 22

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    Hehe this is too cute and wonderfully penned A tuna bear! Well at least they fit well and that bear part doesn't need to go hunting for tuna fish Great rhyme! best wishes in the contest
    Gaylene

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