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Haiku – [bedroom window]




  through my window
tonight’s moon- becomes
            tomorrow’s sun




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Haiku – modern form

Picture inspiration;
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Zen

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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 16
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    tis is good haiku, juxtaposition and veritable observation the most common of all our daily miracles, but as tthe haijin might have seen it, the reader finds the enlightenment..pk


  • Swan song gold member
    October 10
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    very true and a nice ku thank youfor sharing your talent here


  • Ethereal One gold member
    September 24

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    excellent expression

    You have captured the relationship of the sun's light and the moon's light so well in this haiku. Your bedroom window is magical.

    Good luck in this contest!

    Jeannette


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    September 24

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    Interesting!

    You've got a nice way with the contempt Ku! All the best in the contest. Guess this was one sleepless night huh?


  • Olivias Violin
    September 22
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    Great!


  • crivanea silver member
    September 22

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    ohhh....i see night and day in this...how clever love it


    • Malabu
      September 22
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      oh yesss...you see too, i swear! that window is magic LOL

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