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xxXxOnyxXxx k

She is all that *g*l*i*t*t*e*r*s*
In her (world)
An ~innocent~ .**.Fairy Queen.**. girl
xoxoxThenxoxox a [man] CaMe AlOnG @nd BrOuGhT her
                                                                                        down
For “*’sticking’*” by him she !s truly a #clown#
With his drug (((heroine ,
                                cocaine,
                                      ecstasy ,
                                            marijuana)) XxhabitXx he becomes hot
she fears that with his xxXxXmadnessxXxXxx that one day she will get
..._...|..____________________, ,
....../ `---___________----_____|] = = = = = D
...../_==o;;;;;;;;_______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__) /
....// (..) ), ----"
...//___//
..//___//
.//___//        shot   

K After every –forced— kiss  with [s][h][a][t][t][e][r][e][d] .g.l.a.s.s. taste -
She has ***mascara*** tears          her face 
                                        down
His {bitter sweet} l♥ve and black _e_y_e_l_i_n_e_r phase
  ((S))                                                   
((P)) 
      ((I))
  ((R))
      ((A))
  ((L))
      ((E))
  ((D))
    *Her down a road of sinful craze  ♥  *
The Goth girl ([{(exiles)}]) herself from the ,.e.,.a.,.r.,t.,.h,.
            .•*special @nd magic@l from birth.•*
she’s like *Edgar Allen Poe’s* (raven) love ♥ , xXxxLenorexxXx
                                              ……….
oOo----- graceful------oOo but 0oovampyoo0 she sits on a
              ***night sky marble floor***
she –injects- blue [{(venom)}] in her %veins% to ^color her
                        ~~~red blood blue~~~
xXxshimmeringxXx powder and white foundation                                               
    .*:.fashion.*:. eyelashes in place with glue♪♪
                                        ……….
.:..snort..:. .s.u.g.a.r.y. ~cocaine~ and >.>sneeze<.< out *glitter*
(crack) *whore* {style} without the • Kate moss • waif –l-i-t-t-e-r-
              [blue black] xXxcoloredxXx hair with ***extensions***
on her [w][r][i][s][t][s] $ tennis $@@@ bracelet@@@&friendship charms- to |cover| her /c/u/t/t/i/n/g/ .*.obsessions.*:.
Onyx LiPStIcK & (candid) skin tone so *porcelain* and `fair`.
she has a bl@ck&wh!te .*.contrast.*. with her (s)(k)(i)(n) and hair
                                      ……….
…:::…baby’s breath…:::… and black and blue -----roses---@
                            [{(like her bruises .k)}]
she’s constantly .*.*.*dreaming.*.*.* and needs to wakeup
(eyes) [hidden] {behind} a ***.*.Marie Antoinette***.*.
          *~.Masquerade.~*.*{[(mask)]}*. with .~*.intricacy.*~. -
with a wonderful >.pattern<.< as a spider web,
              .~*:.woven.*~.flawlessly.
She ^kneels^          in her ***sequin***,$onyx$ dress colored black 
                    down
                          .*:.wishing.*:.for
[s][o][m][e][o][n][e] [t][o] [c][o][m][e] [a][l][o][n][g]
      ……….and +add+ the color that she lacks.........
  she lives in an .:.eternity.:. were every (day) is [night]
she is as ..*.*.:.*.*.mystical.*.*.:..*. as the
              ((moon)) [within] her #*.misty.*# xxXxxveilxxXxx .
                                                    ……….
• dreams of tulle and lace style • th@t for her c@n *never fail*
she needs to (ditch )her =violent= [tattooed] .*:.sanguine.*. Love ♥.
for SoMeOnE that is pointed >  out to her from *angels* ^above^
                            .*.:.she needs someone.*:.
        to ~glue~ .:.her.:. ♥ heart♥ .*:.back.*:. *together*        sOmEoNE to )turn(.k her :::winter::: cold into .*.summer.*:. weather
  so she can • paint • her black ~fingernails~ a =)happy=).:.*.pink.*:.
    Someone to _s_t_e_e_r_ k her .:.•.*..ship.*•.:. and not make it S
                                                                                                          i
                                                                                                          n
                                                                                                            k          a hopless ..o..x...romantic...o...x... onyx girl , adds more *glitter* in her world       
                    ...*...the end...*...k
                                                                                             
                                                                                                     
k
*´¨)
¸.•´¸.•*´¨) ¸.•*¨)
(¸.•´ (¸.•wonderful k
K
Dirty Pretty Poem by Katrina
.*•.¸(*•.¸♥¸.•*)¸.•*..
* ♥ * ♥ Katrina ♥ * ♥ *
¸.•*(¸.•*´♥`*•.¸)*•.
k¸
k


Author notes

Author notes
please excuse the random 'k''s every now and then , i have an anxiety disorder.
i hope you like this dirty pretty poem, if you want to read some of my other attempts visit my profile.
thnakyou for hosting this contest,i like dirty pretty poems and not many contests are about them. thanks again. k
byyyyyyyyyyyye k

PS, Writing LiKe ThIs means dirty pretty poems =) =) k

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  • AngelicDreams
    1 day ago
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    Trying to focus on all the words is starting a migraine attack!!! I finished half of it. and I will bookmark it and be back later to finish it.

    Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • hershey101
    November 10
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    WOw! this is the first time I've read dirty pretty poems... I can say its pretty amazing ! Brillant and fasnicated! thanks for sharing with me and thanks for entering and good luck


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 7

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    I really love this piece, i mean amazing, one of the best dirty pretties ive read in a long time and it is amazing, brilliant!
    good luck and thanks for entering!
    -penguin-


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    October 25

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    I don't really get the whole dirty pretty thing, probably because I'm old fashioned when it comes to poetry! However, after reading this, I understand your story and the pain involved and actually the way you highlight certain phrases and/or words with the formatting actually brings it to the attention of the reader, well done! Thank you for entering, I enjoyed learning more about this type of writing!


  • moaner
    October 15

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    well i wasn't happy about the amount of lines, but you sure made it worth my effort to read. this was beautiful, in dirty pretty style or ordinary stanzas. creative, fun, sad, beautiful, and interesting. thank you so much for reading. i love the gun you managed and the stars around your name by the way. lovely. good luck in my contest xxx


  • Thewordflow
    October 12
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    Shame about all the annoying fancy outlay :L

    It's good given the type of poem you are writing but remove all the extra fancy bits, and the story doesn't have much to stand on :/ aghh well.

    Good luck and thankyou for entering


  • katik
    September 29

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    Hey k

    Kool poem =), this is really like gold on a page, it really did deserve the gold trophy, this is one of the best Dirty Pretty Poems that i have ever read. it is brilliant.clever and wonderful k


  • Naridill gold member
    September 28
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    AN's
    'please excuse the random 'k''s every now and then , i have an anxiety disorder.'

    Loved that.

    But honestly. Remove all the *fancies* and I feel this piece doesn't have much ground to stand on. I look beyond formatting and feel that there is potential here, you tell this piece storylike.

  • katik
    September 28
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    Kool Poem , you have a unique style of writing , i like lines - .:..snort..:. .s.u.g.a.r.y. ~cocaine~ and >.>sneeze<.< out *glitter*
    (crack) *whore* {style} without the • Kate moss • waif –l-i-t-t-e-r-
    and -a hopless ..o..x...romantic...o...x... onyx girl , adds more *glitter* in her world . k this dirty pretty poem is , wonderful, brillaint, creative,fantasic,astonishing,marvelous,magnifisent,good,splendid,nice,great,glittiry ,shiny and just wonderful k.
    Katik


  • myusikah
    September 26
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    Oops, I forgot to add this!!!

  • myusikah
    September 26

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    That's really creative. I like how your excessive punctuation creates a relative image around the word. Your excessive punctuation compliments whatever you're writing. I find it very beautiful, and sometimes dirty pretty can be annoying, you painted a picture here, and made it into something artistic. I can't do dirty pretty, cause I am a Grammar Nazi, but I love reading it - people are so creative and make images out of punctuation marks. It's genious!!!

    Loved the poem!

    -->pia♫♪


  • xxBlack Dawnxx
    September 25

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    this is the first time i have read dirty pretty and wow its awsome i realy love this poem so much, i might just try write my own dirty pretty


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 22

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    This is a very wonderful dirty pretty poem with a chilling storyline...kinda reminds me of a poem I wrote...I like this alot!!! Thanks for entering my contest!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy

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