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Lunch

Sugarcoated marrow, candy floss spread
Hopscotch, staple gun, running on my bread
Fever crusted peas, boredom and delight
Bones of banana peal, splattering fright

A contest entry

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  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    November 8

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    I wish I had entered this contest. It's pretty cool. I love the idea of it. I love this write. I'm surprised it didn't place at all. Awesome job! Hopefully you'll write more like this!

    Safely hidden within her fantasies,

    ~ Dreamer With Dreams


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 22

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    hehe this is wonderful! perfect nonsense and I love it best wishes in this contest
    Gaylene