N oors of Sky’s Bride, may it shine upon your grand beauty.
O n your fair essence, may it dance the fragrance of purity.
O ath of Companionship, I adjure Night’s tinseled curtain on
R eviving from ashes, like an legendary phoenix, on and on.
Author notes
This is dedicated to my dear fair friend, Noor who is indeed a luminous soul like her name. (Noor means sunlight)
The last line is inspired by her quote: "And like a Phoenix I'll rise from the ashes on and on"
I hope our friendship goes stronger and deeper by passing of time. Love you and Hugs
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me Acrostic poetry! by Hikari Lady.
1200 points, ended October 2, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow
This was a strong dedication to a persom whom you like. I loved its acronymical nature and short structure. thanks for sharing. Keep penning you seem to grow with evry poem. -
An inspiring endearing write for a dear young lady, another ap daughter...You are so well suited, as you both have such a spiritual strength within...Lovely acrostic, hon! M
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Sister Massy,
This is a lovely Acrostic and tribute to a dear and talented friend. Write on dear poet!
Brother Dennis
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Oh sweetheart! This left me speechless, it's beautiful and too much for what I can ever ask for. It's my utmost plasure that you're my friend and I am very grateful and happy for the day we came across each other. You have such a wonderful and graceful heart. Loved how you added my quote and how you've woven it in this wonderful write. Love you hun and miss you so much, your absence is really getting into me.
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My dear, I am glad you liked it hun! And thanks for the little green cup
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An excellent acrostic that I sure Noor cherishes!
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In this simple acrostic, you are able to catch such radiant beauty! Your imagery and your vocabulary, especially, are amazing! Thank you for sharing, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Your friend should be very grateful to have such an amazing friend
Best wishes,
blessed be,
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fine work
Quite a lovely Acrostic and a fine tribute to a dear friend featuring some nice imagery and choice metaphor. George..
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a good piece that spins language into another realm with fine grace and ease, ah let the fragrance waft across the sky's trails and forevermore capture beauty at its finest.
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What a sweet poetical comment, dear Poet
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such a lovely acrostic in poetic tribute to a friend - very nicely written and a sweet sharing of your heart.
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thank you
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stunning my sweet soul
this is breath taking
and i know Noor will love this so
well penned in heart
always Hugs Angel♥
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I hope so, my dear one! Thankee for kind words ever! and hugs back, hun
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Excellent
Wow, what a great acrostic. So very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest
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Glad you liked it, dear Poet
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What a beautiful tribute this is! I really enjoyed this one! You did great with it.
Best of luck in this contest!
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Thank you kindly for kind words here
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This is absolutely wonderful. What a beautiful tribute. The images are fantastic and the flow beautiful. Even your AN is poetic!
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Oh my dear, you're so kind in your words. Thankee for that
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