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Monday destinies


Sunday nights
            slowly transforming
                                          into...

you'd think
the world was asleep
preparing for Wall Street-paced
  Monday destinies

please...
  as the story goes
    there's no rest for the wicked


…and she took shots of caffeine like they were 170 proof

…and the snowflakes landed on her hair as she slammed her phone shut with unusual violence

…and she smiled, and she laughed, and she cried, and she pointed and laughed


…and she lived cliché

      but she did it with such flair…

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 23

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    best i've read from you so far..much progress in your writes...lovely...i especially love the ordinary emotion in this original piece..the way you portray emotion is stunning