the way your voice broke was familiar in a way i still can't figure out.
"I cant do this anymore, I'm sorry"
maybe it was the unsureness in your voice i've heard a million times before.
maybe it was the feeling of losing you all over again, like our song playing on repeat.
you always were my favorite thing about love songs, && you always did have a way with words that let you break my heart, keep me hanging on your every last word && waiting for a call that won't come.
you were my fairy tale story, minus the happy ending.
you, with that perfect smile.
you, with the way your voice still manages to fill my mind completely.
you, with those hypnotic eyes hidden behind your hair.
the sound of you breathing is the closest thing to comfort i can remember feeling in weeks.
& i wonder what he would think if he knew you were the one i dream of at night.
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About my ex. Recently we realized (or just admitted to each other) that were still in love with each other, although i'm with his best friend now..
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ouch tricky situation there! I love how you put these complicated emotions into words. I feel this one is a bit more cliched then your others, but it's still a good piece. i do like the way you put the 'stingers' in the last sentance to bring the reader up-short against the message you are conveying
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