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Teddy, like a bear not like roosevelt

I want to pretend I'm a visitor in this strange place
That will never happen
I'm taken down
Down by you
If I could rip out my heart and give it to you I would
The uselessness of it is overwhelming
The days I suffer alone are too long
Come and take the heart
All I want is for your hands to hold my heart
Take it or leave it but it belongs to you

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