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Haha, I can!

Having a positive attitude plus a dream, means that you actually can look backwards before moving on - because you will be able to let go of things.

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Prompt - I can look left, I can look right. But I can't look backwards
One liner

A contest entry

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  • sidewinder silver member
    September 26

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    sometimes that's all we can do is move forward instead of regretting all the things that have happened in our past!
    You have me thinking with this!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • peridotPixi
    September 25

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    looking left right and backwords makes things wonderful and you can look backwards and use what you have done to make your looking forward a more postive exspriance you have done a wonderful job with that promt good luck in the contest and as always keep up the writing, ~Amy


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 22

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    JUDGED!!

    This is quite a profound one liner!!!
    sometimes saying less is more and it is so in this case.
    Wonderfully done poet.
    Thanks for entering and all the best.

    Ken