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I Love The Universe

The Alpha and Omega.
The ying and the yang.
Everything coming back like karma again.

Out of the clouds of gas and dust.
Pushed along by the solar winds that gust.

For so long, lost in the maze of the solar myst.
Only to realize that I simply exist.

The supernovas causing death and rebirth.
And, I love the universe.

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    October 30

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    Wise-Wonderful...


    Interesting thoughts and emotions... "I Love The Universe" gives the readers a picture of a soul that marches for freedom on the road of awareness.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    September 24

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    You have so much knowlege dear poetess, it is a pleasure to read you
    So much wisdom too
    Well done


    • HaleyMary
      September 24
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      Thanks. I feel like I can never get enough knowledge some days. The more I read about the universe, the more I want to learn!

      Thanks for reading and commenting.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 22

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    You are so on target with this. Perfect understanding.
    Well written rhyme

    • HaleyMary
      September 23
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      thanks, Buddy. Glad that it made some sense. sometimes I find that my poems are mere exploration and I'm not always entirely sure how they will turn out and it's interesting to see what meanings others derive from the thoughts, as well. Thanks for reading and commenting.


  • harjeet
    September 22

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    I Love The Universe Too!

    wow Mary. These are great lines about life and universe. The never ending universe like never ending hope. There may be some obstacles but you get yourself eventually

    "Only to realize that I simply exist."
    is the very powerful line... simply love it

    • HaleyMary
      September 23

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      The universe holds much hope. I don't really see obstacles in the universe, though. I think the only obstacles that people may face in the world is lack of knowledge. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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