melted dark choc'late
skidding down ice cream mountain
sea swirl of passion
melted dark choc'late
skidding down ice cream mountain
sea swirl of passion
Author notes
Sundae senryu...
Prompt words: chocolate, sea
Graphics by A2K-M-C
In a list
A contest entry
- PREWRITES... Group contest for Chocolate-eating peg-leg Pirates! by Periwinkle Blue.
900 points, ended September 28, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Words come alive when answered in kind.
Comments
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mmm..chocolate sundae for breakfast..how delightfully delicious!..pistachio ice cream please!..
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Ah, pistachio---greens with chocolate---
or separately---but yummy and
can't-live-without items!
Steamed spinach with
lemon and melted
butter gives
chocolate
a run for
# 1!!!
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..steamed spinach eh?..that sounds terrifically tempting and is entirely novel in the inclusion of butter and lemon..i will certainly give that dish a try!
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Congrats on your HM and your premonition which makes me go Hmmmmm....
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hah! will put it in the 20-ingredient salad!! The hmmmmm.!!!!!!
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The hmmmmmm is the secret salad ingredient that makes us go Mmmmmmmm. Hold the Bacos. lol
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Oh, for such a place... your poem leads me to yearn for the magic of this location. I would retire there with a spoon and a dish and not much else. lol
Fun to read! 
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A perfect pirate hideaway,
a slippery slope spa!!
thank you,
M-C
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a good poem penned, ah i could just do with some chocolate right now, for the last two weeks i have given up all things sweet and i am having a nervous breakdown in my veins.
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Oh, to be deprived of essential endorphins,
what a just cause that must be!!!
And how strong-willed you must be.
Writing poetry without chocolate--
akin to no punctuation!
M-C
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Yummy! I just ate about a quart of ice cream last night, peanut and chocolate swirls, I could have drowned and been happy doing so.
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A true chocolate loving pirate.
Hah! Lots of walking the deck
to make up for that almost
quart!!!
Nice to see you, malmadre!
M-C
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Yum!
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Starting the "Yum" club!!!!!!
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clearly after wandering into onto your page a mere scoop or two will not do tonight. anyway, to the real question - who is Monday?
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A vociferous HAH! And a few more---hah! hah!
Ah, the day/nite planner book---each his own
page!!! Ah, you clever reader, Rick!! -
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LOL
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I love dark chocolate
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Could be a poetic obsession!!!!!!
Fuel for the word production!
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Oh, this sounds wonderful. Now I'm getting hungry! I'll put the coffee down for some ice cream.
I think the Pirates might like the Rum Raisin variety. lol
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OMG---might soon we be dubbed wenches?
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I'm okay with "wench" as long as the word "fine" preceeds it such as..."Aye, tis a fine wench, she is" LOL
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Ah, fine winged-wench---sets you apart
from the other "fine" wenches!
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sooo delicious
and a cherry on top
yummy comes to mind
now I am trapped in swirl of chocolate thoughts
your art reminds of chocolate shop winter
I can smell it!
God bless you
oh and thank you for sharing
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Kathy, yes, crystals, minty---
chocolate mint---cool and inviting!!!
And no calories!!!!!!
I am smiling thinking of the contrast,
your most recent piece,
the esoteric, the Divine
and mine---much more
down to earth, even though
chocolate might be called
esoteric and divine!!!!
Thank you, dear Kathy!
M-C
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This sure can be taken a couple of ways... lol
and since we just had a conversation about a minute ago, a very specific way is crossing my mind... lol
actually make that .... roflmbo
yep, I love this one, love it a whole bunch my friend and I wish you a gold trophy in this contest, best of luck to you
Suzi
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Thanks, Suzi.
I was smiling aniticipating that
you would discover this and
laugh out loud!!
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I don't care if this is a senryu, a haiku or a novel, I just want me a hot fudge sundae!
You know the song, Big Rock Candy Mountain? I sort of dream like that, but about the wonders of life with nothing but snacks.
I want this one to win...because I want ice cream!
Maybe that is what you pirates put in your peg legs, hot fudge sundaes!
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I have a story about a hot fudge sundae.
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Of course you do
Lets hear your story. If it involves a baby getting ice cream all over its face I don't want to hear it.
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Did you say something?
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I'm used to being invisible.
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It helps
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Why does that sound familiar?
You are getting good at upstaging
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I don't know if I ever told you that one. lol
Not trying to upstage...I think it would either fall into the category of taunt or even quite possibly annoy, depending on my mood.
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I predict a fairly even match, word for word!
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I've been resisting ever since I wrote it!!
Ah, the snacks. With my green filled fridg
I am happy, but....always room for happy time--
chocolate, et al.
Yemland, I can picture it. A big mountain
of delight, with a cool stream of Moxie
running down the mountain, right
into Yem's cistern!!!
Darn, You should join the pirates---in the guise
of one of your splendid characters!!!!
There was just an influx of new mmembers
at the end of pixie's contest!
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Had to write this now in the middle of the night! That sounds good, I am a hot carmel fan myself, love the description you put out there. Excellent. Blessings.
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Oops---I was still trying to get it on the page---still fixing!
Thanks, Denise!
M-C
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