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Sundae on Monday




melted dark choc'late
skidding down ice cream mountain
sea swirl of passion





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Sundae senryu...

Prompt words: chocolate, sea

Graphics by A2K-M-C

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  • Sudo Nimh silver member
    October 6

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    mmm..chocolate sundae for breakfast..how delightfully delicious!..pistachio ice cream please!..


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      October 7

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      Ah, pistachio---greens with chocolate---
      or separately---but yummy and
      can't-live-without items!
      Steamed spinach with
      lemon and melted
      butter gives
      chocolate
      a run for
      # 1!!!


      • Sudo Nimh silver member
        October 7
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        ..steamed spinach eh?..that sounds terrifically tempting and is entirely novel in the inclusion of butter and lemon..i will certainly give that dish a try!


  • pixiestix gold member
    September 28

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    Congrats on your HM and your premonition which makes me go Hmmmmm....

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 28
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      hah! will put it in the 20-ingredient salad!! The hmmmmm.!!!!!!


      • pixiestix gold member
        September 28
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        The hmmmmmm is the secret salad ingredient that makes us go Mmmmmmmm. Hold the Bacos. lol


  • Periwinkle Blue
    September 27

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    Oh, for such a place... your poem leads me to yearn for the magic of this location. I would retire there with a spoon and a dish and not much else. lol Fun to read!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 27
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      A perfect pirate hideaway,
      a slippery slope spa!!

      thank you,

      M-C


  • individuality gold member
    September 25

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    a good poem penned, ah i could just do with some chocolate right now, for the last two weeks i have given up all things sweet and i am having a nervous breakdown in my veins.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 25
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      Oh, to be deprived of essential endorphins,
      what a just cause that must be!!!
      And how strong-willed you must be.
      Writing poetry without chocolate--
      akin to no punctuation!

      M-C


  • malmadre gold member
    September 24

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    Yummy! I just ate about a quart of ice cream last night, peanut and chocolate swirls, I could have drowned and been happy doing so.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 25
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      A true chocolate loving pirate.
      Hah! Lots of walking the deck
      to make up for that almost
      quart!!!

      Nice to see you, malmadre!

      M-C


  • arafura gold member
    September 22
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    Yum!


  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 22

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    clearly after wandering into onto your page a mere scoop or two will not do tonight. anyway, to the real question - who is Monday?


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      A vociferous HAH! And a few more---hah! hah!
      Ah, the day/nite planner book---each his own
      page!!! Ah, you clever reader, Rick!!


  • Simply Olivia
    September 22
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    I love dark chocolate


  • pixiestix gold member
    September 22
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    Oh, this sounds wonderful. Now I'm getting hungry! I'll put the coffee down for some ice cream.

    I think the Pirates might like the Rum Raisin variety. lol

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      OMG---might soon we be dubbed wenches?


      • pixiestix gold member
        September 22
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        I'm okay with "wench" as long as the word "fine" preceeds it such as..."Aye, tis a fine wench, she is" LOL

        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          September 22
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          Ah, fine winged-wench---sets you apart
          from the other "fine" wenches!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 22

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    sooo delicious
    and a cherry on top
    yummy comes to mind
    now I am trapped in swirl of chocolate thoughts
    your art reminds of chocolate shop winter
    I can smell it!
    God bless you
    oh and thank you for sharing


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      Kathy, yes, crystals, minty---
      chocolate mint---cool and inviting!!!
      And no calories!!!!!!

      I am smiling thinking of the contrast,
      your most recent piece,
      the esoteric, the Divine
      and mine---much more
      down to earth, even though
      chocolate might be called
      esoteric and divine!!!!

      Thank you, dear Kathy!

      M-C

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    September 22

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    This sure can be taken a couple of ways... lol
    and since we just had a conversation about a minute ago, a very specific way is crossing my mind... lol
    actually make that .... roflmbo

    yep, I love this one, love it a whole bunch my friend and I wish you a gold trophy in this contest, best of luck to you

    Suzi


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      Thanks, Suzi.
      I was smiling aniticipating that
      you would discover this and
      laugh out loud!!


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 22
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    I don't care if this is a senryu, a haiku or a novel, I just want me a hot fudge sundae!

    You know the song, Big Rock Candy Mountain? I sort of dream like that, but about the wonders of life with nothing but snacks.

    I want this one to win...because I want ice cream!

    Maybe that is what you pirates put in your peg legs, hot fudge sundaes!

    • pixiestix gold member
      September 22
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      I have a story about a hot fudge sundae.


      • Yemassee gold member
        September 22
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        Of course you do

        Lets hear your story. If it involves a baby getting ice cream all over its face I don't want to hear it.

      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        September 22
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        Why does that sound familiar?
        You are getting good at upstaging
        the YeMaster!


        • pixiestix gold member
          September 22
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          I don't know if I ever told you that one. lol

          Not trying to upstage...I think it would either fall into the category of taunt or even quite possibly annoy, depending on my mood.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      I've been resisting ever since I wrote it!!

      Ah, the snacks. With my green filled fridg
      I am happy, but....always room for happy time--
      chocolate, et al.

      Yemland, I can picture it. A big mountain
      of delight, with a cool stream of Moxie
      running down the mountain, right
      into Yem's cistern!!!

      Darn, You should join the pirates---in the guise
      of one of your splendid characters!!!!
      There was just an influx of new mmembers
      at the end of pixie's contest!


  • Denerica silver member
    September 22

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    Had to write this now in the middle of the night! That sounds good, I am a hot carmel fan myself, love the description you put out there. Excellent. Blessings.


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      September 22
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      Oops---I was still trying to get it on the page---still fixing!

      Thanks, Denise!

      M-C

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