Lockers being slammed by impatient hands
Shoulders brushing against one another in the crowded halls
Hundreds of voices going into one ear and out the other
The shrieking of the bell overpowering the senses
My mind becomes the bell
Shutting out the world around me
A world where wrong is right and right is wrong
My focus is lost by the tension
Thrashing tension conjured from eyes set to kill
Eyes that look but don’t see
With a gaze that bores holes into my flesh and right through my soul
With the bitter judgment of blind men
Pointing fingers and whispering among themselves
They see no wrong in what they do
Only the right in what they think
No matter how cruel their judgment is
No matter how many tears hit the floor
Tears of loneliness shed from glass eyes
Glass eyes shattered by hearts of steel
Stained by the darkness of the soul within
They grin from ear to ear as their peer frowns
Laugh as they watch their victim fall to their knees
Pleading for freedom from the clutches of hatred
Pleads that are nothing more than cries on deaf ears
They hate to love
They love to hate
They live to instigate
And shout at the Lord above
We all live within hatred
A hatred that resides within eternity
And buries itself within the soul
A creation of man
As well as the destruction of man
The raging tides of a dark bottomless ocean
That wash over the pure grains of sand on the sunlit shoreline
And carry them away from salvation
We are the grains of sand from the sunlit shoreline
Swallowed by the dark waters
And pulled below the surface until we dissolve away
Becoming a part of the dark watery abyss
We are all doomed to succumb to our own creation
For there is no one left to pick up a bucket
And plunge it into the abysmal water
To bail us out before we are carried away by the cold darkness
Author notes
This poem was written for an english assignment where we had to talk about hatred and discrimination within the school and the world. I thought it was one of my best works so I've decided to upload it onto here for your viewing pleasure, if you want to call it that, lol ;b
Aside from that, this one gave me quite a hard time on trying to lay it out stanza-wise to give it a better flow of sound, but this was the best I could do. Please enjoy and I look forward to any forms of criticism as they assist me in correcting any errors or making the overall poem sound better.
What do you think?
Comments
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welcome to allpoetry
You have many good lines written out here. I especially like the message within your words. I think you relayed that nicely.
I am unsure of the format, it seems this could have a better flow if the lines were broken up a bit differently.
Still, great job expressing yourself. I hope you will continue to write and share.


