i.
He stitches me underneath cellophane kisses
but when he suffocates me he really means it.
Has he ever tasted such a bittersweet dilemma?
I believe he hasn't seen nothing of me yet.
Though karma always has a way to repay the damage
this urge for payback will soon enough not cease to be expressed;
for humiliating myself because of you has never been so self-degrading
as telling everyone the pain you've given me too.
It sickens the idea that I ever cared for such a thing,
that I knew from the beginning was too good to be perfect;
you cease to see the logical but refuse to let loose the ties.
ii.
Has smoke exhaled from my lips as if gently pronouncing your name?
Tears will not evade these eyes while in sober state;
You haven't seen nothing yet.
Lips will part in logical reasoning & I will see you on the other side
coming back for more;
as if you never wanted, as if you never needed;
Devil in disguise meets its maker tonight.
Your sensual games will no longer produce attention towards my hormones;
for you never give me what desired & only leave my ticket expire.
Take your vain ideas and shove 'em hard in your throat & swallow;
you will then understand how much bullshit I took from you then.
iii.
You've kissed the venomous lips you could've ever tasted;
bittersweet remnants shall override & imagination will began to elevate.
You will remember my name & come begging in return.
they say that on the other side life is so much sweeter,
but on this side, things keep getting better;
baby I can tell you ain't seen nothing yet.
iv.
shall I caress gently the lips I've poisoned?
Shall I lead you again towards the road of perdition just like you did?
Baby, you don't know me just yet.
Author notes
well I kind of used this contest as a venting show... so yea.... revenge is always a sweet candy..
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A contest entry
- Inspired Revenge by Wandering Woodchuck.
900 points, ended September 23, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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My favorite lines:
You've kissed the venomous lips you could've ever tasted;
bittersweet remnants shall override & imagination will began to elevate.
You will remember my name & come begging in return.
Isn't this the sweetest form of revenge?
Very well done. Thank you for entering my contest.
Mike
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wow thank you very much for the HM and well yea... thanks for the lovely comment
I appreciate it a lot
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WOw
this was really deep i loved how you wrote it. i loved the art it was great felt like i was pretraying a part you drove me into the piece very nice well done girl
I LOVE IT ITS AMAZING
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awww thanks hun.....
glad u liked a lot
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AMAZING.
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