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Country Girl

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Down Home Girl

 

I’m just a good old country girl

with a country brain.

I like to watch it snow

and I like to walk in the rain.

From the breeze I can hear a sweet refrain

guess I got country pure and plane.

My family are from country roots

I grew up wearing high top boots.

Overalls and flannel shirts I wore

God put country in my core.

I write the things that come to my mind

in sophistication I was left behind.

Those twenty dollar words don’t fit my pen

To write a Sonnet where do I began?.

These forms torture a word ‘till it’s a sin

Some poems even stop before they begin.

So I will write my country verse

could get better, could get worse.

I’ll write about the Mountains and the Sea

And the Man above who holds the Key.

I won’t correct what I think is wrong

every writers words are his own.

When our words are history

there will be more found lacking than me.

 

                                     

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Any notes I have are in my head and heart, I will continue to write as it feels to me,
if anyone doesn't like it leave it alone.Save your eyes and my temper.

This is from a country heart with no poetic training

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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    1 day ago
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    A lovely refreshing poem, that tells a fine tale and contains a vital message about rules of poetry. a talented write thank you.


  • Griswold
    October 18

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    LOL, you tell 'em. I write just about any form though. I dont care about their silly meter though. Wouldn't know an iamb if it bit me in the ass. The "purists" might say its not a Sonnet because its not iambic pentameter but I could care less. How many would even know? Those folks have no emotion in their poetry because they are so limited in word choice. If it flows, it goes as far as I'm concerned. Nice to meet you Ruby... Scott

  • Lil Rebel Kami
    October 1

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    PURE COUNTRY GAL FOR SURE...

    Yes you are a country gal and you stay that way! I loved your wording for this one as it fits you to a T. I am not so good with the statistics and grammer of writing either so they read me as I am as I too am a plain and simple country girl and I write in a country fashion Loved this one SIS! Love Kami


  • JaydinC
    September 28

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    I can appreciate what this write was about. Normally I would've just gone straight over your poem after the first few rhymes, but I decided to give this one a chance. I must admit that the 'country' you talk about here is completely not my scene, and I have no love for the redneck neighbours I had as a kid that tormented me during my highschool years. But this write here reminds me of a country that is peaceful, and serene, so far away from what it was for me. Good write...really good write


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 29
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      There is world of difference between red necks and country people. I can't stand red necks myself. So glad you read the work and understand he difference.


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 26

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    I agree. My poems are my babies. Hurt them, and mama hurts too. I, too, am country and proud of it. I write plain and simple. I hate having to use a dictionary to read a poem. Keep writing your way. God bless.

    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 29

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      Than you, I just can'tmake myself be a fancy writer. I have tried and failed miserably in my own eyes there is justo eart in a poemyou have to look up words to use.

    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 26
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      Thank you I tried the fancy stuff and it isn't me at all, I love te fancy forms but my pea brain can't floolw directions that well.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 25
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    gotta love the country and those country girls! "Those twenty dollar words don’t fit my pen" - a great line. nicely expressed.


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 26
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      Thank you, your writing is so rich and a joy to read, your talent exceeds a poetry site.


  • findingurself.less gold member
    September 22
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    From one country girl to another, I love this!! Reminds me of home! Thanks for the great read!


  • Bluemonday silver member
    September 22
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    And why not Ruby Girl...A full on in ya face statement. I am a country girl...Dan


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 26
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      Thank you what would we do with out country girls, if everyone wrote a like wouldn't this be a waste of time?


  • toomysterious
    September 22

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    I love this little poetic rant. I too, hate dealing with those who presume to correct us, or box us in. I generally write what comes to me, if by some miracle great words come and it sounds brilliant to others I will take the praise and be grateful for it, but it is not by design. You write just fine and your poetry always has a wonderful rhythm to it, that being said, I only have one question. Did you mean lacking in the very last line, that's how I read it just a typo? And I hope you put the Rainy Say one back in, too, 'cause it was awesome blues.

    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 26
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      Thank you, Rany Day is back on and I could write another one right now. I have tried the fancy forms but can't stick with the directions, so I will just be me and if someone doen't like it well you know..


      • toomysterious
        September 26
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        Thank you. I just reread my comment and say I had several misspellings too, the vision dims late at night.


  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 21
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    simply country

    enjoyed the read.....

    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      September 26
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      Thank you, I am finished with trying to write the way others do, I get all side ways when some one says they don't understand some simple line, so many have no history beyond the moment.

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