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Cutting edge and dangerous

Driving recklessly though my mind
seeking for pieces of sanity
that was lost upon the way.

cradled in unexpected disasters
forcing the mind into a corner
drowning in dispensed sorrow

shielding, protecting the only thing left
three little souls, screaming, miserable
a quiet shh, it will be okay

and yet my mind reels, screaming
that I have failed.

Never get between a Mother, and her children.

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Just thoughts running through my head.

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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 22
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    i'm not a mother, but i've had my share of these thoughts and feelings for friends, sisters, and other loved ones.

  • Juno101
    September 23
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    the first stanza is my favorite. Good job.