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Insanity

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  Inner Insanity
state of granular Being
Confused emotion

A contest entry

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  • Aribeth
    2 days ago
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    Don't Know about the poem...

    ... But that picture is wicked!!!! Congratulations You win 2 claps from me


  • songstress80
    October 29
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    that's what insanity is basically about. nice short. well written. sweet and to the point.


  • Angel of Mercy
    September 23

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    short, sweet and to the point but yet it still brings out a lot of emotion. Great job!


  • Midnight Raeven
    September 23

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    This is a very thought provoking poem, that you have written, my love. Great job!!!

    I think it was very well done and I hope that you win!

    Love your wife,
    Virginia


  • azure85 gold member
    September 22

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    So much packed into your haiku, it is a good one for people to think about as the thought run rampant through each scene. Thank you so much for your haiku.

  • crosscountry07
    September 21

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    Wow. This is great, Lucian. I think the picutre suits the poem quite well. Good luck in the contest and keep up the amazing work! -Liz


    • Lucian Valcor
      September 22
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      thanks liz im trying to get back into the dark poetry and i thought how much more creative could you get with a dark haiku

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