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Fall







Summer weather
yet red leaves-
fall










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experimenting with 'yet' in haiku

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  • Peteskid gold member
    September 22

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    I like this a lot, not an aha..but aaahhh...h

    in warm weather
    yet footsteps sink
    into sounds of fall


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 22

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    Ah, the joys of Indian Summer
    served Gaze-style. You captured it
    and the "yet."

    M-C


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 21

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    Why of course a "yet" haiku. I'd know it anywhere.

    How about a yeti haiku?

    at the table
    eating fish stew
    serengeti yeti

    Hey, it's just a picture of real life, he's out in the kitchen now eating.




  • hugh wyles silver member
    September 21

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    Lieber Aziram,


    Fruhling Wetter
    und die Blätter sind grün
    Vögel versteckt

    A 4/6/4 Deutsch haiku

    Yours is more understandable!

    Beifall, Liebe und Umarmung XXX Der Vater.

  • tara wilson gold member
    September 21

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    it's been gorgeous here too. i enjoyed this & its simplicity.

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