Though Shakespeare was a man of words
I’m really not impressed,
I’d rather break free from the herds
and set out on a quest
to fly high, free among the birds,
on wings that have been blessed,
become unique, sing songs absurd,
be cuckoo in a nest!
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Cuckoo egging on or nesting
far from madding crowd protesting
inequali-tease ? Digesting
far from common herd, flight testing,
wing soars - more, for sharing best sing
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Nah-you're far above a cuckoo!! I picture you as a Song Thrush....fly on pretty poet!
xxx
xxx Hilly
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Very well written short poem. You say a lot in these few short lines. Very wise!
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Free Dom...me
Who freedom praise raise though their dreams
more indeed of challenge met,
or they'd prefer to fast forget,
than quest successful, for it seems
birds that fly high from the outset
use that to spy on prey or get
escape from predators that teem
below. The common heard sees gleam
too often as upsetting threat
dares not believe in blessèd team
though pays lip-service to light's beams
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Charming piece you have penned dear
Your flow and rhyme is lovely
"I’d rather break free from the herds
and set out on a quest
to fly high, free among the birds,"
I just love these lines as they speak volumes
To be your on person and reach for your goals
Much love and many blessings my friend
David
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