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Screaming at the stars;

The sweet smell of death
Drifts on the soft fall breeze
And the candles are blown out
Another year older
Today she's 17
Yes her;
The girl with masscara tears rolling down her cheeks
All around her
People clap and laugh
And she puts on a smile
As fake as a high school girl

All she wants is love
To find the Edward;
To her Bella
And she runs into the darkness
Screaming at the stars
But even the man in the moon;
Can't bare to look at her anymore

In the graveyard fog she lays
Waiting for day to come
But hoping she won't make it that long
A Halloween night;
So alone

The thudding of anothers heart
As he holds her hand so tight;
And so sweetly whispers 'happy birthday;
              my love'
And she turns to find a boy
With masscara tears
Laying in the graveyard fog
Waiting for day to come
And together as they scream at the stars
She puts on a smile

As real as the Edward at her side

♥






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So, if this isn't what you were looking for, I understand. I tried to put b-day, dark and emo all together. Let me know what you think!

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  • foreveryourslove
    September 23

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    wow i looooooooooove this it is great... well my favorite part of your poem was "The thudding of anothers heart
    As he holds her hand so tight;
    And so sweetly whispers 'happy birthday;
    my love'
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  • phillyhottpockets
    September 22

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    honestly i was pretty blown away by this it sums up a lot of the bad feelings a person can feel but makes them feel hope of finding someone jsut like them to hold on to


  • phynix
    September 21

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    i thought it was good, then i got to the twighlight reference.... srry, not a twighlight fan. Other than that tho, i thought it was rly good.