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King - woods

Come inside my poisonous venom dungeon
Take the toxic arrow melted into your pain
In your image that deep entered realm has begun
The envenom of destruction has been modified
In the deep depraved agnostic faith I hand out
Through the winds I blow each breath of hate
I cocaine that dirty parody towards your demise

My substance is dabbed in the cold liquor
The devilish cries and of king-woods surmise
Those apples of temptation supplement my evil will
On the thrones of hallowed saints to destroy
My abatement will succumb only to my charms
For those demons fall under my command
And will march evil eyed under my control
So this time you will never escape my fate for you

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  • withering.whisper
    September 21

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    oh i do love the ending. "my fate for you" i'd love to know that fate! haha. terrific write, ad good luck in the contest. take care


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    September 21

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    Oh, great take on that picture prompt provided! From the very first line you had me hooked and drawn into what felt like a surreal nightmare.
    And there are so many lines that just pop out of this and really grab the reader,
    "Take the toxic arrow melted into your pain" - WOW... left me feeling a twinge of that pain. Another superbly penned piece you have here. Best wishes in the contest from your #1 Outlaw