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infinite

It wasn’t today
    but after
that you  were

It’s not now
    but later
Perfect, endless, divine

It’s not
    waiting
but dying
    waiting
Making it real
and alive

It is not in forever
but infinite in now

~

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  • zt
    September 23
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    I like the things this doesn't say with words. It's been too long. Good to see you post something.


  • secberm
    September 21
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    :-*