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So Confused – So Dizzy

Your voice alone makes me dizzy
Your kisses even more;
My mind with you is busy
I can’t stand this anymore!

It really makes me cry
That for you I don’t exist;
I know we’ll have to say goodbye
But this temptation I just can’t resist!

Sometimes it makes perfect sense
And sometimes none at all;
When with you I feel in trance
And I’m not afraid to fall!

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