On those rain filled nights
wind blowing a storm
lights flicker til
out
Why am I left alone
when you promised
you would never
leave?
When darkness comes
and sounds of nothing
echo with poundings in my
heart
where are you when I
need you most?
If you ever heard of
what love is
maybe you will know
what it is not.
Please tell me what you think
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I love it!
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Beautifully poignant piece you have penned
..the imagery is stunning in the brevity of this piece..I like many can relate to this piece..lonely hearts are sad enough with adding in the emptiness of silence and darkness
Very well done..David
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Hey i really like this. I love when people use elements of nature to make a poem. I did whith my poem called Thunderstorms Remind Me of You. You might like that one. I use elements of nature in that too. Good Job.
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This is quite beautiful, the imagery of your emotions is very compelling... very nice to read and wonderfully written
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Powerful
This is a very powerful poem!
I can feel the emotions pouring from you, as I have felt them too before.
I understand your questions all too well, unfortunatly no one holds the answers to these questions except for those who have caused us to ask them.
I will keep peaceful thoughts for you!
Awesome emotional write, I truly enjoyed it!
-Brea
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