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Aches

My body aches as my heart breaks
And the rivers from my eyes
Pour from my head to my heart to the floor
I watch you silently walk to the door
And as it slams
I watch my man – Walk away from me
And I beg and plead my feet to flee
To run and fight to be by your side
To show you that I’m not just someone who can be waxed and waned with the tide
To show you that no matter where you go
I won’t just be blown
By the wind
When I said forever
I meant ever and ever and ever
Yet you seem to think I don’t say what I mean
So you intervene
And you stop what was just started
And you left me and my heart shattered
How can you sleep at night
Knowing I’m not by your side
How could you walk out that door?
And simply just not give a shit anymore?
I could never do that to you
Never leave you alone and heartbreakingly sad too
You obviously don’t love me as much as I love you.

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  • so sad

    i wish i could hug you brea this poem makes you seem so sad. i hope you search for your inner strength and lean on your friends. i just want you to know im here .

    lots o love

    your friend clara snow


  • Lowell Poe
    October 14

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    Very amazing lass.....
    Sometimes you cant show someone what love is.
    They just dont know what its like.
    your poem reminded me of this tune.......
    your work inspires lass....

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkGUt4QYc08

    Bless you little gypsy,
    Liam


  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 21

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    sad but excellent its very real and i relate to this one a lot sounds like someone i know so no more but yep excellent verse and very good timing un be known to you lol x cheers glenn