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Because I'm Caving in

Last night was a dark night
tranquil
    but with too many moons


Goodbye came far too quickly
but that's okay because I deserved it

There was something comforting about the pain

It was a steady ache constant
There's no comparison


I couldn't grasp words, they were too smooth
on my scarred hands

Too harsh on the burns

Tonight I spend in flowers trying to
be a happy girl, maybe I'll forget for one
second that I'm not loved after all

I'll go home to nothing and (if I'm lucky) I won't go to bed alone




Author notes

Not as good, but I try to post everything, so here you go...

-Andi

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