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What Every Guy Needs to Say:

I know I have my problems and
Most of the time, I'm at fault
But you don't have to shut me down
and lock me in the vault. (figure of speech)
I admit to being wrong and
try to live for the better
but my feelings are hurt and withered
like my heart's being suffocated by your sweater.
Baby, I understand that if I keep this up
I will lose the love of my life
Please just know that I'm trying
and I'll love you until the day I die!
I know I've been curt
and inconsiderate of your feelings
trust me, I was wrong for that.
I'll learn to understand your meanings.
I know I've messed up big time
and I ditched you when you needed me
I don't deserve your kindness and generousity
Someone really needs to beat me!
You deserve someone better
Someone who won't make you cry
Someone who understands you
Who isn't afraid to try.
You're a strong and wonderful person
who has often been hurt and lied to
I honor you for loving me
I love you for honoring me
I respect you for the hurt I've caused you
and how you've endured it.
I don't deserve a fifth chance!
You've put up with my bullshit for so long
and so long I shall be forever grateful
I solemnly promise to be yours
honest, respectfully, and truthful.
I've never cheated on you,
but I've hurt you in many different ways
But please hear me when I say
I'll live for and love you for all of my days.
You are my passion
my grace
my beautiful ribbon
my danty lace
so delicate, so fragile
yet, so complicatedly strong
let me be your pocket, to hold your feelings
let me be your prongs, to help keep you together
but first, let me pull myself together
for I am so spread and pulled a part
Then I'll fix the damage.
I'll mend your broken heart.
You are my wonderful, amazing sweetheart
You are my darling lover
You are my brilliantly tough Baby
And youdeserve a better ME--no other!

Wouldn't it be nice if they said it and actually meant it?

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  • HeartbrokenVampire
    September 22

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    amazing..truly amazing..

    i can only dream of the day when he'll realise this

    brilliant write!

    i applaud you again!