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someone help me with this dream

i walk around,
no ware to be found,
cant find my way out,
so i scream and shout,
please someone help me,
or at least help me see,
i cant see through this darkness,
so i need someones hand,
im drowning in quick sand,
someone has to care,
about me,
oh wait,
thats only my dream,
a hopeless dream.

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  • WideEyedSuicide
    September 22

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    "Someone has to care, about me, oh wait, thats only my dream, a hopless dream." That was the best part of the whole thing. You are a very talented writer with words, keep up the good work!