The sun shines down on the hills
As I clutch my box of pills
To keep me clinging on to life
Now that I have lost my wife.
But I know I shall survive
I am determined to live
To see the sunshine on the sea
I shall not go into eternity.
A contest entry
- Deep, Dark and Lovely by Shantti.
400 points, ended October 6, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think guys.
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This is sweet. Short and sweet and to the point. It's so sad when one looses a loved one, especially a spouse that one is fond of. But moving on is the most beautiful thing a person can do.
Outstanding. Thank you for entering this in my contest
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It is indeed a bit upsetting when your wife dies.
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nice
short, simple, but SOO deep and beautiful.
i like it
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