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(from an old diary of mine)

They say
Loves a rope you use to
Stop you slipping
Cure to all things bad
A plaster for the bleeding
A life vest you've always had
And sorry
Sorry’s overrated
Overused today
How many times
Is one word
Meant to make this
All ok?
No,
Loves a rope you use to
Hang yourself
The poison that you drink
The razor blade that cuts
The lake in which you sink
And sorry
Sorry doesn’t help
Especially if you're
screaming
When’s the last time
you said sorry,
and it held any meaning?

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  • This is freaking awesome!
    I really do enjoy this, and feel that I can identify quite well.
    A most excellent piece.


    • evil-incarnate
      October 19
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      thank you im glad you enjoy it although i really dont consider it to be that great. just some old words i used to think meant something i guess. im glad they speak to you


  • God is a woman
    September 23

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    i love this its really nice, dark but nice, your a really good writer you know that...


    • evil-incarnate
      September 23
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      thanks liz im glad you like it. im not sure about that, but whatever you say lol.