i touched a rainbow yesterday; i thought i could find a place somewhere between the shades of blue and violet until i looked at my hand and saw sweet nothings etched into the creases of my palm.
I'm starting to believe him when he said that i'd never truely be okay.
but for now, that's enough.
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A contest entry
- Prompt: Prewrites II. by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended September 22, 41 entries
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i love how it such little words you can bring such strong emotions out i realy like you poetry
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Thank You for Your Entry ~
For something short this holds so much power and passion between the words; that have me wanting more but feeling satisfied at the same time - fantastic!
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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thank you, that's exactly what i was aiming for =] im glad that you liked it!
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<3
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aw, I really love this sweetie. It's so beautiful though it feels sad.
Change the "i" before the word "place" into an "a". little typo
If my words seem kinda scattered it would be because of the not sleeping and the xanax, though I'm sure that's not surprising.
Anywayysssss,
This is gorgeous and amazing sweetie. I seriously adore it.
<3
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don't worry honey, that makes two of us with the sleep problem. and thank you for letting me know, i fixed it =] i tried to aim for that short but good poem, i dunno home well i managed lol
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you managed it perfectly. I tend to write too much and never end up with something short.
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it was actually much longer but i split it up and put up a second poem names butterflies. its kinda short too, lol
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