The lines on the screen zip past my eyes
they dance through my head
marking score cards in my mind
while i lay bound and restless in my bed
the hushed buzz of static comforts
trying to pierce the raging mob
a mushroom cloud erupts with angst
as thousands of thoughts seep into my blood
no one shouts louder than another
No one thought stands out
just uninterrupted noise
that no one could doubt
Sitting with tear stained cheeks
your body's numbed and your hearts in a bind
with your last shred of hope and a forever plastered smile
the battle rages on in the rushed white noise of your mind
Author notes
just jotted it down... i dunno.
Honest critical comments please.
Comments
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I really like this one...I wish that I could really describe what it is about the poem that I like about but I cant... The strength that you share the Muse is really strong



